Chapter one
Naru looked between her two best friends, and the two people in the whole wide world that she loved too the depths of her heart. Her mind swirled, her heart fluttered, as two pairs of eyes looked at her, fear and worry in their eyes.
To her left, stood Keitaro Urashima, landlord and complete dunce, yet a man who had won her heart, and had finally made it into Tokyo University. Almost every day he would stumble in on her changing, or be in the women’s bath. He was someone you wouldn’t expect to ever like.
And yet… he was a kind and gentle person. He always thought of the others at the inn before himself. Even though he was dense at times, and was basically a pervert, Naru Narusegawa had fallen for him. As he had for her.
To her right, stood Josun Tomoro. They had met when she (and coincidently Keitaro) had gone on a trip of self healing after they both failed getting into Tokyo University. He two had failed getting into a school, and had fled on a trip of self healing, and hiding, from his strict mother and father, who would have been furious had they got to him before he left.
It was partially thanks to him that she had fallen for Keitaro. But he had done it because he believed Naru didn’t love him, which, in reality, she did love him. He was kind and helpful, he cared for everyone at the dormitory, even Keitaro when he was blamed for one of his regular perverted acts.
He had told her when he had gone off to help her bring Keitaro back when he ran off thinking he had failed. She hadn’t known what to say. Like her feelings for Keitaro, she didn’t know exactly how to react or think.
And now, she knew it was time. The two men in the whole wide world that she loved stood before her, standing still in silence, wondering who she would pick. It was touch for her, because she just did not know who to pick.
She looked into the eyes of both of them, and made her decision. She turned towards Josun, tears in his eyes. He suddenly looked sad, but she smiled and said
“Jo-kun, I love you with all my heart!!” She jumped up and kissed Josun so passionately, he had to unlock his lips after only three seconds to take a breathe of air.
They both turned when they heard Keitaro clearing his throat. He too had tears going down his face, and he put his hands on both their shoulders.
“I H-hope you two live happily ever after.” He then turned, and began walking up the cliff face, wanting to get away so they wouldn’t see any more.
Well folks, what do ya think for a first chapter OC/Naru pairing?
From the reactions i got on fanfic.net, i am bracing myself for series flamming
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